Monday, April 23, 2018

2 by 2 in 2nd npm18 #23

Dear Diamond Miners,

Here I stand, O Noble Class,
to help your poem come to pass.
Whisper words of Lego blocks
That I your teacher may unlock.




What words will you whisper today?  Your poem is really developing now. Should we include some sensory details, like shapes and colors?  

Love, 
Ms. Mordhorst

P.S.  Blog visitors, the Diamond Miners love it when you leave comments directly for them. Thanks for all your encouragement!

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BRAINSTORMING 
work hard, seems like, to think, we love, to have, we could
apart and together, pulling and pushing, turning and flipping, stacking and building and modeling
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When we work  
together
it feels fun 
and
difficult like Lego
pieces,
feels like struggling 
with
frustration and figuring
what 
to do. We
live like Legos,
pushing and building, 
pulling and flipping,
lifting and twisting.
We only have
to 
listen to our
friends 
when we build



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Words have been added to this poem by these wordsmiths, in order:
Round 1   Round 2
Ms. M      Ms. M
Ziva         Henry
Eric          Elena
Eldana     Patrick
Henry      Ziva
Kathy      Eldana
Ines          Max
Elena      Xavier
Sophia 
Patrick
Xavier
Arya
Tyler
Caleb
Max



1 comment:

  1. Love the poem diamond miners.It keeps on getting better and better.The poem is so far great.Me and Eldana love it!

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