tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post2491755745177926832..comments2024-03-24T21:33:34.140-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: 2 by 2 in 2nd: npm 2018 #6Heidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-60267067272185681442018-04-10T00:33:51.526-04:002018-04-10T00:33:51.526-04:00What a clever way to build a poem Heidi; I bet you...What a clever way to build a poem Heidi; I bet your students are anticipating their second turn… I'll have to return and see where your wordsmiths take you!Michelle Koganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02575814872372518994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-88572293375957771832018-04-08T21:06:44.633-04:002018-04-08T21:06:44.633-04:00Love where your diamond miners are mining! Will ch...Love where your diamond miners are mining! Will check back later to see the poem unfold.Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-86086713602023805462018-04-08T19:08:51.823-04:002018-04-08T19:08:51.823-04:00What a great project. Each day you mine a line to...What a great project. Each day you mine a line together. And yes, I could not agree more that fun can be difficult and difficult can be fun. A lot of wisdom here. xxxxAmy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-57804583893502186262018-04-08T16:35:22.643-04:002018-04-08T16:35:22.643-04:00Wow! Your diamond miners are crafting quite a poem...Wow! Your diamond miners are crafting quite a poem! How did they get so wise to know already that fun and difficult can work together? Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08210045352610490115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-4672562203862816072018-04-08T08:07:40.411-04:002018-04-08T08:07:40.411-04:00I want to be a Diamond Miner, Ms. Morhorst! What w...I want to be a Diamond Miner, Ms. Morhorst! What wonderful wordsmithing from you and these students... Lego in a poem is pretty brilliant. :) xoIrene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-32350065901556651202018-04-08T07:45:31.703-04:002018-04-08T07:45:31.703-04:00Ugh. Talk about revision and then write "thei...Ugh. Talk about revision and then write "their" and not "there." I stand corrected.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-23333014800766488532018-04-07T16:14:08.177-04:002018-04-07T16:14:08.177-04:00It's quite wise to know that a loved activity ...It's quite wise to know that a loved activity can have its harder parts, too. I enjoy seeing your approach, Heidi. Your students must love the doing.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-38761508823361567022018-04-07T12:09:56.818-04:002018-04-07T12:09:56.818-04:00This is really fun to see. Gosh, I wish my kids co...This is really fun to see. Gosh, I wish my kids could have had you as a teacher! The sounds and the meaning all working together with fun. That's exactly what language should be for all of us. Carry on....great stuff happening here.Linda Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00833034575304594924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-80010862662830205742018-04-07T10:24:42.921-04:002018-04-07T10:24:42.921-04:00Approximately 2 minutes and 2 minutes. Fitting bu...Approximately 2 minutes and 2 minutes. Fitting but not ideal!Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-34551843236241656032018-04-07T06:00:09.746-04:002018-04-07T06:00:09.746-04:00How far ahead of time does each child know it will...How far ahead of time does each child know it will be his/her turn? How long do they think and ponder?Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-71440597055288373432018-04-07T05:59:35.447-04:002018-04-07T05:59:35.447-04:00Plus, I see how you are revising as you go, not ju...Plus, I see how you are revising as you go, not just making a list of two-words-at-a-time, but making lines longer and shorter for better sound and meaning. What a good practice!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-63882034926376683352018-04-07T05:57:54.380-04:002018-04-07T05:57:54.380-04:00Love how you are helping your wordsmiths see the p...Love how you are helping your wordsmiths see the power of their words!<br />Love that LEGOS got in their! Our poems are talking to each other!<br />Love that Ines brought feelings in! Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-77468918560476792018-04-06T12:02:36.525-04:002018-04-06T12:02:36.525-04:00Such wonderful choices! Your response is spot-on, ...Such wonderful choices! Your response is spot-on, Ms. Mordhorst.Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.com