tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post3227175083741442305..comments2024-03-24T21:33:34.140-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: ditty challengesHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-12833394151762745712015-05-10T08:55:28.447-04:002015-05-10T08:55:28.447-04:00Yes, everything the others have said, but also the...Yes, everything the others have said, but also the blood-red font on a white background, and your fabulous expository title. (Thanks for giving me a concise term for what I do so often!)<br /><br />Good luck with your two-book summer! Come up for air to keep us posted!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-85113243093317685372015-05-09T10:42:54.218-04:002015-05-09T10:42:54.218-04:00I am also shot through with your bullet poem. I d...I am also shot through with your bullet poem. I don't think I would have tried such a powerful word, but you have brought it to its knees. Woah, Jack!Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-55759733580273586282015-05-09T04:45:21.808-04:002015-05-09T04:45:21.808-04:00Fantastic response, Heidi. Powerful.Fantastic response, Heidi. Powerful.Renee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01312695417155507664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-76853487206982495182015-05-08T19:55:47.105-04:002015-05-08T19:55:47.105-04:00Amazing job, Heidi. Your poem brings heartbreaking...Amazing job, Heidi. Your poem brings heartbreaking reality.Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-40738730385556295312015-05-08T15:54:02.243-04:002015-05-08T15:54:02.243-04:00Heidi, the fact that the word "bullet" i...Heidi, the fact that the word "bullet" is on all our minds is certainly heartbreaking, isn't it? Wonderful response to the challenge. Julie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12811523890920763782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-80411677117335294592015-05-08T12:38:36.109-04:002015-05-08T12:38:36.109-04:00Wow! Great job, Heidi. Wow! Great job, Heidi. jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-86760415861636708482015-05-08T11:49:09.543-04:002015-05-08T11:49:09.543-04:00Oh, Heidi--fabulous!Oh, Heidi--fabulous!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-4344056237728700372015-05-08T11:27:06.416-04:002015-05-08T11:27:06.416-04:00Love it, Heidi. You really brought our senses into...Love it, Heidi. You really brought our senses into the poem. The George Eliot quote goes with it nicely. I am still wondering about the title.Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-54709657537235721162015-05-08T08:10:40.388-04:002015-05-08T08:10:40.388-04:00Very powerful, Heidi - the metaphor, the shape, an...Very powerful, Heidi - the metaphor, the shape, and of course, the wordplay. Unfortunately, timely. <br />Thanks for sharing.Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-87885110868412079022015-05-08T07:58:53.123-04:002015-05-08T07:58:53.123-04:00I like your effort just as it is with its "co...I like your effort just as it is with its "concrete-ness" and the way the squished together words mimic a bullet's action.<br /><br />I picked bullet, too. My take on it is slightly different, but I think we're both coming from the same place. I have illustrated it and it is set to post as part of my Sunday "Happy Haiga Day" series this week.Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-66045112664843839202015-05-08T07:57:28.496-04:002015-05-08T07:57:28.496-04:00Excuse my French, Heidi, but holy merde! This poem...Excuse my French, Heidi, but holy merde! This poem shot right through my heart. I'm floored. You wrote this in an hour??? Passion is a powerful pen. Thank you!Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.com