tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post5672953013035457901..comments2024-03-29T00:51:16.923-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: more found objectsHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-8161508716968975552016-03-11T16:27:54.135-05:002016-03-11T16:27:54.135-05:00Gosh, these are cool. I want to hear more from ea...Gosh, these are cool. I want to hear more from each different voice. Fabulous. Thank you for sharing them! xAmy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-31584978938620717362016-02-29T03:56:25.816-05:002016-02-29T03:56:25.816-05:00Wow - these are as diverse as they are wonderful. ...Wow - these are as diverse as they are wonderful. I think my favourite is the keys one. Very clever. Sally Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06094054139556676270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-22977364280832085162016-02-28T07:33:24.112-05:002016-02-28T07:33:24.112-05:00Sister Sun Sets You Straight is fabulous! I'...Sister Sun Sets You Straight is fabulous! I've enjoyed so many of your poems on Laura Shovan's challenge--you clearly see the world with a poet's eyes. Thanks so much for sharing!Molly Hoganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16975100905434379155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-91252570715140044312016-02-27T12:51:31.979-05:002016-02-27T12:51:31.979-05:00So clever and each one so different. I'm espec...So clever and each one so different. I'm especially taken with the key poem, and I also really enjoyed your loaded potato poem (read on Laura's site - Feb. 14). You're developing quite the poetic biceps!Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-57895994021907661902016-02-27T08:23:19.494-05:002016-02-27T08:23:19.494-05:00I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poems for found ...I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poems for found objects. Such fun language in the nest poem! Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-18343329128202502192016-02-27T07:21:00.122-05:002016-02-27T07:21:00.122-05:00The repetition in Traffic Stop, the creative langu...The repetition in Traffic Stop, the creative language in nest, the third stanza in The Action of Attraction, and every single line of Sister Sun Sets You Straight...so much to love in this week's worth of poetry!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-80791760095922103782016-02-26T21:36:32.406-05:002016-02-26T21:36:32.406-05:00I love the way you play with words, Heidi! stucco...I love the way you play with words, Heidi! <i>stuccohung, birdhuddle</i> Fun, fun, fun!Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-29129567880720111882016-02-26T20:48:19.905-05:002016-02-26T20:48:19.905-05:00I love your unique and unusual responses to these,...I love your unique and unusual responses to these, Heidi...especially in the case of my photo! Nicely done.Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-72230742031001638452016-02-26T14:26:49.130-05:002016-02-26T14:26:49.130-05:00I especially love the language and rhythm of "...I especially love the language and rhythm of "nest." I had to read it aloud to hear it. The last line completes the picture.JoAnn Early Mackenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17812079420917080829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-58498026733138523602016-02-26T12:30:31.478-05:002016-02-26T12:30:31.478-05:00They may not be finished but they are hardly medio...They may not be finished but they are hardly mediocre! I especially love The action of attraction. It's such a great combination of repetition and juicy words. Liz Steinglasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14614059299412727544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-87469288493354862482016-02-26T11:20:15.371-05:002016-02-26T11:20:15.371-05:00Heidi, I have followed your poems for Laura's ...Heidi, I have followed your poems for Laura's project with delight. Each one seems to be so unique. I have to say i love the one on the nest. I look forward to the last few poems of the challenge.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-48414962604005686842016-02-26T06:29:49.315-05:002016-02-26T06:29:49.315-05:00You *are* on a roll. That last poem -- love the vo...You *are* on a roll. That last poem -- love the voice!author amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09800868615186010584noreply@blogger.com