tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post7230761175790760344..comments2024-03-24T21:33:34.140-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: revisionHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-26993777501776300252015-01-30T10:13:05.809-05:002015-01-30T10:13:05.809-05:00Love that ending!Love that ending!Charles Watershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336052424127127605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-78454098363539252442015-01-07T17:57:58.418-05:002015-01-07T17:57:58.418-05:00Now that's beautiful. Revise sharpens, refines...Now that's beautiful. Revise sharpens, refines, polishes, until you gleam. :)GatheringBookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04477710897574769648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-3875533554019618712015-01-04T19:39:52.833-05:002015-01-04T19:39:52.833-05:00Dear Heidi,
Thank you for sharing this process. It...Dear Heidi,<br />Thank you for sharing this process. It makes me feel less of a schlump for not posting my one little word yet, with a poem or few sentences about it. And I luv light - to me light includes revision, the light that comes with good revising... But since to revise is one of my joys, I am with you, liking each of them.<br />And that Yule tradition sounds warm & nourishing.<br /><br />~ j a n <br />jan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-50748737599160997642015-01-04T09:17:53.631-05:002015-01-04T09:17:53.631-05:00I'm always fascinated to read about other peop...I'm always fascinated to read about other people's thought/writing process. I think you and I are very similar, Heidi, in that "got to get on with it" attitude. Thank you for sharing and reminding me of the importance of "letting the light/ in more than twice."<br />Happy New Year!Catherinehttp://readingtothecore.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-20256723515540280072015-01-03T20:33:54.651-05:002015-01-03T20:33:54.651-05:00Ha--you made me laugh with your exquisite irony. ...Ha--you made me laugh with your exquisite irony. And speaking of exquisite, love your poem, especially that wonderful second stanza. Wishing you a year of wondrous revision.Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-28475226982820103932015-01-03T15:41:55.351-05:002015-01-03T15:41:55.351-05:00What a fun story about your word, Heidi. And such ...What a fun story about your word, Heidi. And such a beautiful poem too.Catherine Johnsonhttp://catherinemjohnson.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-32576276569830706902015-01-03T12:36:34.758-05:002015-01-03T12:36:34.758-05:00I love this story and all the nuances of meaning t...I love this story and all the nuances of meaning that you found.<br /><br />Oooh. Nuance might be a good word for next year!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-3941011552359340892015-01-03T09:54:03.955-05:002015-01-03T09:54:03.955-05:00Nice turn there at the end! I'm a words perso...Nice turn there at the end! I'm a words person, but I haven't yet been snagged by this one word for the year movement. Maybe next year...Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-26154337705082001062015-01-03T08:47:39.301-05:002015-01-03T08:47:39.301-05:00Letting in the light! Love your little OLW poem. ...Letting in the light! Love your little OLW poem. Light was a possible word for me but I also needed a more active word. It's hard to decide but once the decision is made, it feels right. Happy New Year!Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-24166295979809116142015-01-02T22:53:08.911-05:002015-01-02T22:53:08.911-05:00Heidi, you went through quite an elaborate process...Heidi, you went through quite an elaborate process for your OLW but it paid off in the end when you got two for the price of one. Your poem is the icing on the cake. On Spiritual Journey Thursday our blogging group wrote about light and it was an eye opener seeing all of the different aspects of the word as it pertains to a spiritual journey. Our OLWs take us on a journey throughout the year. I announced my OLW to be LISTEN and one of my nerdlutions as keeping TIME (deadlines and being on time are tough for me). For Poetry Friday, I created a museum-like look at the Finding Fall Gallery and an invitation to the new collection which I hope you will join as a writer.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-74575460129367243512015-01-02T21:57:52.377-05:002015-01-02T21:57:52.377-05:00"Angels fly because they take themselves ligh..."Angels fly because they take themselves lightly." GK Chesterton, if my rusty mind remembers. <br />Thanks for sharing your word and thought process! Here's to a year of creating and revising. Robyn Hood Blackhttp://www.robynhoodblack.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-25472285380460235022015-01-02T17:56:57.550-05:002015-01-02T17:56:57.550-05:00"letting the light
in more than twice"
..."letting the light<br />in more than twice"<br /><br />Beautiful!<br /><br />May your year be full of light and revision and beauty... Happy 2015!Amy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-83797635294239537562015-01-02T15:12:51.647-05:002015-01-02T15:12:51.647-05:00I rather like that you reserve the right to change...I rather like that you reserve the right to change, in light of further scrutiny? One year, I don't even remember the word. I should have changed it rather than quit. We do what we feel is right, I suppose. Happy New Year, Heidi. I love the way you wrote your word into a poem pertinent to the thoughts!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-83580655631148805382015-01-02T12:11:26.291-05:002015-01-02T12:11:26.291-05:00Well done, Heidi! If nothing else, the definition ...Well done, Heidi! If nothing else, the definition you found of "revise" certainly proves your path is lit and you're headed in the right direction. Happy New Year!Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-5588725972878946172015-01-02T09:22:06.829-05:002015-01-02T09:22:06.829-05:00Thanks for sharing how you revised your one word, ...Thanks for sharing how you revised your one word, Heidi! Was fascinated to follow along. "Light" does illuminate "revise," doesn't it? Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.com