tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post1273272391524540793..comments2024-03-24T21:33:34.140-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: poetry freedomHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-13528853569766695342015-12-06T18:22:55.120-05:002015-12-06T18:22:55.120-05:00These are wonderful. I really like Gigi's &quo...These are wonderful. I really like Gigi's "Porcupine's Enemies" and especially that "brown as a deep hole," and the wonderful ending: <br />"it walks sloooooooooowly<br /><br />it walks safely through<br /><br />the dark night"<br />Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-58170186899658379792015-12-06T08:54:36.577-05:002015-12-06T08:54:36.577-05:00Dear "Sally," Your fuzzy sloth is my fav...Dear "Sally," Your fuzzy sloth is my favorite. So slow. Love the "Grip Grip" that repeats.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-72307995310131189712015-12-05T12:43:53.893-05:002015-12-05T12:43:53.893-05:00black spots dark as a
shadow rats
I like the fl...<i> black spots dark as a<br />shadow rats</i><br /><br />I like the flow of this one, especially, but they're all so well done!Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-82996816321108469292015-12-04T19:33:01.924-05:002015-12-04T19:33:01.924-05:00Those are some talented second graders you're ...Those are some talented second graders you're writing with, Heidi! Thanks for sharing their poems (Like your class, I have been writing about rain forests this month.)Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-17592010210630381032015-12-04T13:07:46.285-05:002015-12-04T13:07:46.285-05:00Loved your Poison Jewels. I thought it was about ...Loved your Poison Jewels. I thought it was about the tree frogs. Lovely.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-80126992481477169552015-12-04T11:40:10.782-05:002015-12-04T11:40:10.782-05:00Love them all, that deep and brown hole of a porcu...Love them all, that deep and brown hole of a porcupine, and the repetition, the 'juicy' words everywhere, Heidi. It's so much fun to see what children take from their research. Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-50986346279193235542015-12-04T07:45:23.601-05:002015-12-04T07:45:23.601-05:00Rejoice, indeed! And yes, juicy. Well done, poets,...Rejoice, indeed! And yes, juicy. Well done, poets, and teacher who decides we must take some time to write some poems. Thank you for sharing!Irene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-48390763734476442952015-12-04T03:03:45.078-05:002015-12-04T03:03:45.078-05:00Very clever! I think my favourite is Buggy Fur, be...Very clever! I think my favourite is Buggy Fur, because the use of upside down writing is so very clever. Sally Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06094054139556676270noreply@blogger.com