tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post1915514555927300947..comments2024-03-29T00:51:16.923-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: pick up an object: spoon poemHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-16446469189371034172015-01-20T18:54:37.951-05:002015-01-20T18:54:37.951-05:00I echo everyone's sentiments here - loved the ...I echo everyone's sentiments here - loved the heartbowl most of all. :)GatheringBookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04477710897574769648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-3532792179771330032015-01-19T14:33:07.695-05:002015-01-19T14:33:07.695-05:00The circular nature of this poem made me read agai...The circular nature of this poem made me read again and again. The longing, the dreaming. Thanks for the links and introducing me to this idea of pick up an object and write. Great for kids, too. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-55260205108821037282015-01-18T10:40:50.372-05:002015-01-18T10:40:50.372-05:00I love everything about this poem! Your rhymes are...I love everything about this poem! Your rhymes are very Kay Ryan-ish.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-30386516395991813742015-01-17T12:47:24.349-05:002015-01-17T12:47:24.349-05:00I like all the scoops. This is great!I like all the scoops. This is great!Catherine johnsonhttp://catherinemjohnson.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-9196882566172124772015-01-17T11:38:35.027-05:002015-01-17T11:38:35.027-05:00It's beautiful, Heidi, those "scoops of w...It's beautiful, Heidi, those "scoops of white foam/spoonfuls of fizz", elusive and ephemeral. Love that you connected to Amy's post.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-54933313162801296362015-01-16T19:26:44.928-05:002015-01-16T19:26:44.928-05:00I like it, Heidi. I like the repetition of sounds,...I like it, Heidi. I like the repetition of sounds, the movement, the new words, the pang.Tabathanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-39294288175821737792015-01-16T11:37:06.833-05:002015-01-16T11:37:06.833-05:00Lovely. Yes, it seems to have the never ending for...Lovely. Yes, it seems to have the never ending forward momentum of yearning. Liz Steinglasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14614059299412727544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-10736550710267535052015-01-16T10:13:58.337-05:002015-01-16T10:13:58.337-05:00"empty will dream"
oh, and a "heart..."empty will dream"<br />oh, and a "heartbowl"<br />This has magic, and I feel so lucky to be connected to it in that poem-to-poem way! Happy happy PF, my friend! xo, a.Amy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-62581825330794753172015-01-16T07:29:40.191-05:002015-01-16T07:29:40.191-05:00your "heartbowl" !! LOVE. Such a great w...your "heartbowl" !! LOVE. Such a great word, "scoop." Thank you for this wonderment this morning! xoIrene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-67091980799455977772015-01-16T06:16:25.684-05:002015-01-16T06:16:25.684-05:00Love how circular this feels, Heidi - just like ye...Love how circular this feels, Heidi - just like yearning itself. Thanks for posting it. Julie https://www.blogger.com/profile/12811523890920763782noreply@blogger.com