tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post4814927354212327873..comments2024-03-24T21:33:34.140-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: one of my many projectsHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-10048235193725265382010-04-15T20:22:56.001-04:002010-04-15T20:22:56.001-04:00I finally got around to trying a Definito. Mine d...I finally got around to trying a Definito. Mine defines phlebotomist:<br /><br />http://readingyear.blogspot.com/2010/04/poem-13-definito.htmlMary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-18310204105500047112009-11-16T18:29:05.446-05:002009-11-16T18:29:05.446-05:00Fun! I tried one with a bit of nonsense for my dai...Fun! I tried one with a bit of nonsense for my daily poem today.<br /><br />each whisker <br />sharp and clean<br />no droopers <br />looking rickety<br /><br />each front paw<br />quite pristine<br />resulting from <br />much lickety<br /><br />I elect to be precisely<br />persnickety<br /><br />--Laura Purdie Salas<br /><br />Thanks for the fun exercise, Heidi!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-45740355406097832822009-11-16T12:25:38.655-05:002009-11-16T12:25:38.655-05:00Heidi, These are delightful! Love those immaculate...Heidi, These are delightful! Love those immaculate tulips!<br /><br />Definitos rock:>)<br /><br />Diane, your visceral poem is great, too. Brings to mind a very scary memory for me, and my chest actually started thumping and feeling hollow. Yikes!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-3442858020111372222009-11-14T17:28:10.357-05:002009-11-14T17:28:10.357-05:00I think you've got something here. Love the tw...I think you've got something here. Love the twists & contrasts. You could include a rule about that perhaps. i am going to have to try some of these.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-3698324729001675952009-11-14T13:39:32.055-05:002009-11-14T13:39:32.055-05:00I'm back! I loved this exercise!
Don't p...I'm back! I loved this exercise!<br /><br />Don't panic--think it through <br />--the noise outside your<br />window is not, I repeat,<br />is not the boogyman.<br /><br />And yet, your heart still<br />pounds. Your breath comes<br />in gasps. Your instinct is <br />to RUN! And you do.<br /><br />Your gut over your head.<br />Visceral.Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-61941582009392961212009-11-14T13:08:42.323-05:002009-11-14T13:08:42.323-05:00Thanks for introducing us to the definito. I like...Thanks for introducing us to the definito. I like these! Form poems sometimes perplex me completely, but then again, I was never a puzzle person, but I'll give it a shot and get back to you if I'm successful.Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-66211626673227751582009-11-13T20:48:37.136-05:002009-11-13T20:48:37.136-05:00I especially like the flip in the second poem, Hei...I especially like the flip in the second poem, Heidi. Totally love fibs (including one in my novel-in-verse). We were working on form in my adult poetry class & everyone got carried away with the idea of mathematical poetic forms.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-3314971009547431712009-11-13T15:29:52.525-05:002009-11-13T15:29:52.525-05:00Sounds like a new form to me! I'm trying to t...Sounds like a new form to me! I'm trying to think of a word to try it with...any suggestions? Or challenges?Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-67278458312346233062009-11-13T12:08:01.597-05:002009-11-13T12:08:01.597-05:00Fun idea! If I get a chance to make one, I'll ...Fun idea! If I get a chance to make one, I'll send it to you.Tabathahttp://www.tabathayeatts.com/noreply@blogger.com