tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post6475983366867722864..comments2024-03-24T21:33:34.140-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: the dishwasher of my mindHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-77904197085236231192022-02-26T11:43:00.491-05:002022-02-26T11:43:00.491-05:00Carrier Water Heater Not Heating<a href="https://housetipper.com/carrier-water-heater-not-heating/%22" rel="nofollow">Carrier Water Heater Not Heating</a>shanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16962310603222950657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-43534252011631830702013-11-02T11:04:50.647-04:002013-11-02T11:04:50.647-04:00Just happened across this poem this morning. What ...Just happened across this poem this morning. What a great analogy. So, so true of school. How little time we give kids to actually be and grow into themselves. You make me think of a line from another poem, I think it's by Myra Cohn Livingston, "It takes a lot of slow to grow."Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-91807673102928586832013-10-30T13:43:35.176-04:002013-10-30T13:43:35.176-04:00Hi, Heidi. I think the dishwasher is a great metap...Hi, Heidi. I think the dishwasher is a great metaphor for a mind always cycling from one thing to the next. Your poem really captures that busy day. (Loved the protein packed breakfast goodies.)Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-79187069262252851662013-10-20T12:24:47.007-04:002013-10-20T12:24:47.007-04:00Thanks for all the links, Heidi, I've got lots...Thanks for all the links, Heidi, I've got lots of reading to do!Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-59748830268713290662013-10-19T10:46:11.543-04:002013-10-19T10:46:11.543-04:00Your poem is full of great words, food words, dish...Your poem is full of great words, food words, dishwashing word, words that fill that pliable kindergarten mind. I slept late this morning; I couldn't believe the clock read 8:00 when I woke up, but my dishwasher mind needed it. And now I do not feel guilty at all. Thanks!Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-33516261982598824822013-10-19T10:08:36.566-04:002013-10-19T10:08:36.566-04:00Heidi,
Thanks for the instructional post.
I like y...Heidi,<br />Thanks for the instructional post.<br />I like your poem a lot. It has lots of potential for playing with form and changing lay out/line breaks.<br />Enjoy your sleep in.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-26739102639480572262013-10-19T09:45:54.143-04:002013-10-19T09:45:54.143-04:00Gads! You captured the jambardment of kindergarten...Gads! You captured the jambardment of kindergarten specifically...and of a school day in general!<br /><br />I had a nice, brain-cleansing sleep-in this morning!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-22359607679655999522013-10-18T22:18:36.141-04:002013-10-18T22:18:36.141-04:00Isn't it sad that even the day of a kindergart...Isn't it sad that even the day of a kindergartener has gotten so busy. Your short phrases and choice of words really helps your poem to feel the craziness of the day. <br /><br />CathyCathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-46979609327257683742013-10-18T18:34:27.667-04:002013-10-18T18:34:27.667-04:00"Sizzled residue of thinking." Yes!"Sizzled residue of thinking." Yes!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-88038842058974031412013-10-18T18:11:47.454-04:002013-10-18T18:11:47.454-04:00Love it, Heidi! You really filled that poem with j...Love it, Heidi! You really filled that poem with jambardment! Love the back-story as well!BJ Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810656260650783785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-68873221607466588612013-10-18T14:15:37.225-04:002013-10-18T14:15:37.225-04:00I hoped you would stop by for a little dirtying of...I hoped you would stop by for a little dirtying of some tasty dishes, Jama! Glad you enjoyed it.Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09902158336083356337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-7717462080146300112013-10-18T14:14:34.191-04:002013-10-18T14:14:34.191-04:00Love the way you've jambarded this poem with t...Love the way you've jambarded this poem with the demands of a kindergartner's day...and that you've included images of this interesting new research!Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-61723071934235736212013-10-18T14:03:45.126-04:002013-10-18T14:03:45.126-04:00What a great poem, Heidi. Thanks for sharing the i...What a great poem, Heidi. Thanks for sharing the interesting facts about sleep and toxic brain waste! jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.com