tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post9056770214649137044..comments2024-03-29T09:18:43.117-04:00Comments on my juicy little universe: all that we rememberHeidi Mordhorsthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-23318270726167191112010-03-22T15:08:04.614-04:002010-03-22T15:08:04.614-04:00That is a poem with a bite! I hope it helps your c...That is a poem with a bite! I hope it helps your charter school get going with passion & grace. You sound like you're on the right track.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-33616408900867497522010-03-21T08:04:21.505-04:002010-03-21T08:04:21.505-04:00Congratulations for passing the Technical Review! ...Congratulations for passing the Technical Review! <br /><br />Good advice buried in your story of continued re-reading and revision: a piece of writing is never finished! (Glad you removed the NOT and, although it's risky, glad you held firm for nigger. It's a strong point made stronger by strongly offensive (but historically accurate) language.)Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-839565306712428162010-03-20T18:48:54.653-04:002010-03-20T18:48:54.653-04:00Good for you for including that striking poem. I ...Good for you for including that striking poem. I hope your supplication brings the desired results!Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1084574475796190316.post-57661058187315491812010-03-19T21:18:55.882-04:002010-03-19T21:18:55.882-04:00Hooray for you! I think Poetry can promote toleran...Hooray for you! I think Poetry can promote tolerance. <br /><br />Poetry is an art about the inner self. It helps people identify their feelings. If all the people involved in the Columbine shootings would have been aware of their feelings, then perhaps that "incident" could have been prevented.<br /><br />A guidance counselor could have been called in early. If the shooters were able to recognize the signs of depression, they may have been put on medication. They may have sought out some talk therapy from a qualified therapist, etc. The whole scenario could have turned out different.<br /><br />Laura Evansall things poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03676584641409205152noreply@blogger.com