My friends, I know that you are doing all you can to place your body into the company of the millions of others turning out tomorrow to do the first, most basic response in this moral moment--to upend business as usual, the appearance of normalcy. But here's a lil help just in case.
Click the map to find your protest.
An overlapping group of us from Poetry Friday and Laura Shovan's Fab Poetry Project (yes, fab; also Feb), met up joyfully at the MLK Library in DC on Wednesday night for a talk with Maggie Smith promoting her new book DEAR WRITER. She's the one famous for her poem "Good Bones," which she says now feels like it's not quite hers anymore like her other work, but belongs to the public domain. She read it (and has not memorized it, nor any of her poems--that made me feel better about how I can't seem to memorize my poems). I'm dropping it here, because it does have a remarkable ability to do its job, which is to salvage something from the shithole and make it worth the effort.
So here we are, trying to make this place beautiful, and welcoming and spacious and comforting, with our words. The Inklings are doing so this week with a simple challenge to write a shadorma, thanks to Margaret Simon (whose new book, WERE YOU THERE?, has dropped and which you. do. not. want. to. miss!). The shadorma, according to the shadowy information available on the interwebs, is a 6-line poem of Spanish origin with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5. There are those who think the shadorma is not a "real" form at all but a thing somebody made up, which is Spanish like chicken tikka masala (invented in Birmingham, England) is Indian.
Whatever its origins, the shadorma is fun to write. Here's an early try from some years ago:
Shawarma Shadorma
Sleep sizzles
aromatically
on the spit
of night. Carve
juicy slices onto white
sheets of pita bed.
And here's today's effort, an InstadraftTM .
more bones for the reluctant buyer
in a pool
pulled bare of ivy
flowering
quince blazes
briefly, camouflaging thorns--
then cools to spiked hedge
Check out what the other Inklings have shadormed below, if life allowed them the opportunity, and thanks to our first PoFri host of the month, Matt at Radio, Rhythm & Rhyme, where rainbows are being appropriately and thoroughly celebrated!
Catherine Flynn @ Reading to the Core
Molly Hogan @ Nix the Comfort Zone
Linda Mitchell @ A Word Edgewise
Margaret Simon @ Reflections on the Teche
I'd not heard of this form, but you've done a great job with it! Love both of these, and such different tones.
ReplyDeleteI love Maggie's poem. Thank you for sharing it here. I have not heard of the shadorma form. I enjoyed your two samples. I jotted down the syllable count in my notebook and hope to try writing one sometime.
ReplyDeleteI'm joining a group to hear Maggie Smith speak right here in her hometown in-burb of Bexley, OH on Monday!
ReplyDeleteI love how your second shadorma speaks back to Maggie's poem!
That Shawarma Shadorma is quintessential all-things-clever-and-wonderful Heidi. I love the second one as well, and the tension between your well-chosen words. Hang in there! We'll be protesting in Maine (which has over 20 protests going today!), and which has been standing strong in the face of presidential bullying.
ReplyDeleteBecause of my presentation at the literary festival, I won't be going to the march in Lafayette which I see marked as #5 on your map. I have friends going to represent our local LWV. Thanks for the shout out. I love how you personify these thorny flowers. Your poems always dig deeper than the surface seems. I am jealous that you were able to see Maggie Smith in real life. I posted a shadorma today, a day late. I blame the virus.
ReplyDeleteOh, that cooling pool that also has thorns...and flowering quince. It's a tricky business packing so much good and bad together. And, yet you've done it. It's beautiful, right? You could build a campfire to sing around with those flames.
ReplyDeleteThanks for including Maggie's wonderful poem. Yes, we can make this place beautiful. And I love both of your shadormas, especially the quince making that spot beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing yours and Maggie's words Heidi! I'll definitely have to look for her new book. Her "Bones" poem guts me every single time.
ReplyDelete"The spit of night" what a great phrase! So great to see you at Maggie's event!
ReplyDeleteI love "Good Bones" and love that she thinks of it as belonging to everyone now. So glad you got to see/listen to her. Your shadormas are charming. Hugs for doing elder care. I cared for both of my parents in their last months/years and we just don't know what it will be like until we go through it. ❤️❤️
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