Friday, April 4, 2025

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Greetings, April; greetings, Poetry Month; greetings, visitors! That all sounds much more upbeat than I feel, frankly. I feel a little like I'M the one who stood up and speechified for 25 gravity-amplifying hours on the floor of the Senate trying not to wet my pants--but then I have been fighting off a few annoying health issues for weeks, and I do live rather close to Implosion Central, and raise your hand if you also are struggling to go with the flow of elder care? In any case, it has been WORK lately to remember, DAILY WORK, that our daily work of witnessing the world through poetry has real power, remains worth doing, is a legitimate response to the terrorism of this "administration."

My friends, I know that you are doing all you can to place your body into the company of the millions of others turning out tomorrow to do the first, most basic response in this moral moment--to upend business as usual, the appearance of normalcy. But here's a lil help just in case.


Click the map to find your protest. 


An overlapping group of us from Poetry Friday and Laura Shovan's Fab Poetry Project (yes, fab; also Feb), met up joyfully at the MLK Library in DC on Wednesday night for a talk with Maggie Smith promoting her new book DEAR WRITER.  She's the one famous for her poem "Good Bones," which she says now feels like it's not quite hers anymore like her other work, but belongs to the public domain.  She read it (and has not memorized it, nor any of her poems--that made me feel better about how I can't seem to memorize my poems). I'm dropping it here, because it does have a remarkable ability to do its job, which is to salvage something from the shithole and make it worth the effort.


Good Bones | Maggie Smith

Life is short, though I keep this from my children.
Life is short, and I’ve shortened mine
in a thousand delicious, ill-advised ways,
a thousand deliciously ill-advised ways
I’ll keep from my children. The world is at least
fifty percent terrible, and that’s a conservative
estimate, though I keep this from my children.
For every bird there is a stone thrown at a bird.
For every loved child, a child broken, bagged,
sunk in a lake. Life is short and the world
is at least half terrible, and for every kind
stranger, there is one who would break you,
though I keep this from my children. I am trying
to sell them the world. Any decent realtor,
walking you through a real shithole, chirps on
about good bones: This place could be beautiful,
right? You could make this place beautiful.


So here we are, trying to make this place beautiful, and welcoming and spacious and comforting, with our words. The Inklings are doing so this week with a simple challenge to write a shadorma, thanks to Margaret Simon (whose new book, WERE YOU THERE?, has dropped and which you. do. not. want. to. miss!). The shadorma, according to the shadowy information available on the interwebs, is a 6-line poem of Spanish origin with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5.  There are those who think the shadorma is not a "real" form at all but a thing somebody made up, which is Spanish like chicken tikka masala (invented in Birmingham, England) is Indian.

Whatever its origins, the shadorma is fun to write.  Here's an early try from some years ago:


Shawarma Shadorma

Sleep sizzles

aromatically

on the spit

of night. Carve

juicy slices onto white

sheets of pita bed.



And here's today's effort, an InstadraftTM .



more bones for the reluctant buyer


in a pool

pulled bare of ivy

flowering 

quince blazes 

briefly, camouflaging thorns--

then cools to spiked hedge








Check out what the other Inklings have shadormed below, if life allowed them the opportunity, and thanks to our first PoFri host of the month, Matt at Radio, Rhythm & Rhyme, where rainbows are being appropriately and thoroughly celebrated!



Mary Lee Hahn @ A(nother) Year of Reading 

Catherine Flynn @ Reading to the Core

Molly Hogan @ Nix the Comfort Zone

Linda Mitchell @ A Word Edgewise
Margaret Simon @ Reflections on the Teche


10 comments:

  1. I'd not heard of this form, but you've done a great job with it! Love both of these, and such different tones.

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  2. I love Maggie's poem. Thank you for sharing it here. I have not heard of the shadorma form. I enjoyed your two samples. I jotted down the syllable count in my notebook and hope to try writing one sometime.

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  3. I'm joining a group to hear Maggie Smith speak right here in her hometown in-burb of Bexley, OH on Monday!

    I love how your second shadorma speaks back to Maggie's poem!

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  4. That Shawarma Shadorma is quintessential all-things-clever-and-wonderful Heidi. I love the second one as well, and the tension between your well-chosen words. Hang in there! We'll be protesting in Maine (which has over 20 protests going today!), and which has been standing strong in the face of presidential bullying.

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  5. Because of my presentation at the literary festival, I won't be going to the march in Lafayette which I see marked as #5 on your map. I have friends going to represent our local LWV. Thanks for the shout out. I love how you personify these thorny flowers. Your poems always dig deeper than the surface seems. I am jealous that you were able to see Maggie Smith in real life. I posted a shadorma today, a day late. I blame the virus.

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  6. Oh, that cooling pool that also has thorns...and flowering quince. It's a tricky business packing so much good and bad together. And, yet you've done it. It's beautiful, right? You could build a campfire to sing around with those flames.

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  7. Thanks for including Maggie's wonderful poem. Yes, we can make this place beautiful. And I love both of your shadormas, especially the quince making that spot beautiful.

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  8. Thanks for sharing yours and Maggie's words Heidi! I'll definitely have to look for her new book. Her "Bones" poem guts me every single time.

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  9. "The spit of night" what a great phrase! So great to see you at Maggie's event!

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  10. I love "Good Bones" and love that she thinks of it as belonging to everyone now. So glad you got to see/listen to her. Your shadormas are charming. Hugs for doing elder care. I cared for both of my parents in their last months/years and we just don't know what it will be like until we go through it. ❤️❤️

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Thanks for joining in the wild rumpus!