Each day the folks at NaPoWriMo are offering a prompt, and I'll start there and see what happens. I'm using my daily drafts to work on a middle grade book with the working title of TREEOGRAPHY, so there will be a lot of tree drafts this month.
APR 20
You may not realize it at first, but the poem "Black Swan on Water" by Carl Phillips is a single sentence! The three-line stanzas mimic the “braids in water” in the penultimate line, and the way the lines get longer and longer also makes the poem as a whole look a bit like the widening wake that a swan leaves as it swims. For today, try writing your own poem that uses an animal that shows up in myths and legends as a metaphor for some aspect of a contemporary person’s life. Include one spoken phrase.
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Front Yard Dogwood
I know
it’s growing
but I can’t see it,
watching this dogwood
in the yard every year since
third grade–it’s still too little
to climb, and I can still reach to
hang from the lowest branch; it
bends and the notched pink flowers shift
to face me, smelling like my own skin after
a bath, and I wonder How does it feel for you, this
growing with no one to mark it on the wall of the air?
draft ©HM 2026
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