Showing posts with label 6-year-olds. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 6-year-olds. Show all posts

Friday, January 24, 2020

ncte poetry notables part 2

Welcome to a warming couple of reviews of poetry collections for the youngest readers, both selected by the NCTE Award for Excellence in Children's Poetry Committee! The whole process of reading through the submissions was a treasure hunt, so I'll start with...

FINDING TREASURE: A Collection of Collections
by Michelle Schaub
illustrated by Carmen Saldana
(Charlesbridge, 2019)

Best for readers K-3, this collection of 18 poems tells the story of one main character, a girl whose teacher has asked the class to share something they collect. But what is her passion?  In her exploration of the collections of her family and friends--everything from buttons to baseball cards, from coins to clocks--our narrator considers what she might love enough to collect, curate and share...and in the final poem she decides:
"My medley isn't common,
nor is it very strange.
It isn't something that you count,
sort, or rearrange."
It's POETRY!  Whether her collection is the very poems in this book, written in her own voice, or a collection of favorite poems from outside this book, is unclear and probably doesn't matter.  Throughout, Schaub's language is effortlessly readable in a variety of free verse and rhyme-and-meter poems. She successfully portrays both the collectors' devotions and the delights of their chosen objects, including SMILES.  There are plenty of these in Saldana's detailed cartoon illustrations, and plenty for readers.


I'M THE BIG ONE NOW: Poems about Growing Up
by Marilyn Singer
illustrated by Jana Christy
(WordSong 2019)

Another collection that hits a sweet spot for ages 4-8, Singer's poems are filled with her characteristic wordplay and celebrate the common but exciting developmental accomplishments of young children.  With titles like "First Good Snap, First Good Whistle" and "Big-Kid Teeth," this book has a poem for all the ordinary leaps that are common to all kids; there are also poems about growing into more specific experiences, like "My Own Seat on the Plane" and "Cannonball."

Yesterday I stood and stared
              at the blue bottom
              of this big pool.
Yesterday, and the day before,
              and the day before that.

But today,
              today.... 
Like a coconut, I drop
             with a smashing splash,
touch my toes to that blue bottom,
             and, in a flash, up I pop. 

The essential business of learning to ride a bike comes in three installments, "Trying to Ride" Parts 1, 2 and 3, likewise highlighting the way that we all learn things bit by bit over time, and effort is usually involved.

Beyond these strengths, this collection is also notable for its variety of companion poems, such as the quiet "In the Theatre" and the noisy "At the Ballpark," its poems for two voices, for its lengthier poems and its brief, triumphant final word on the back cover:

Tying My Shoes

Guess what, you toes!
I have learned to make bows!
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Now that I have done my due diligence as Poetry Committee Member, these books go to PreK with me TODAY so I can do due diligence as a Poetry Teacher!  Meanwhile you can go to Kat Apel's blog for the second Australian-hosted Poetry Friday roundup of the month--which is just as well because there continues to be good and bad news from that beleaguered continent.

Stay tuned for four more reviews of NCTE Poetry Notables in the next few weeks!



Friday, May 1, 2015

what do kindergarten poets do?


As promised last week, I'm celebrating the (endless end) of National Poetry Month today with poems by 17 kindergarten poets from North Kensington, MD!  After our (year-long) week-long poetry study, the most fun this year was noticing who learned what about poets' techniques--some clearly took in the lesson about creating strong feelings; some chose carefully where their words would go on the page; some used repetition (occasionally by accident!) and some went for juicy words or juicy rhythm.  Once again, I consider it my greatest success as a poetry teacher that all but a couple had good ideas and felt capable of writing a poem.

As the teacher I often get both the first and the last word, but today I'll go first and let Anthony have the last word.  You'll see why. 


Frog Song

tadpole  polliwog
tadpole  polliwog
   (gills   gills)

  back legs   shrinky tail
  front legs   shorty tail
    (change  change)
      
      frogpole   frolliwog
      frogpole   frolliwog
          (lungs   lungs)

                              LEAP!

by Ms. Mordhorst
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Ameera’s  Mirror

my mirror
was gone at
recess
it was alone
and shiny

by Ameera


Planes and Trains

airplane
train
the airplanes
are flying
the trains
are rolling

by Cristian


A Ballerina Dancing

a girl put on her shoes
blue dress
blue shoes
then the girl performed
then she took a bow

by Charm


Star Wars Legos

black
green
circles and squares
I made the
Death Star

by Thomas


Ice Cream

I love to eat
ice cream and
eat other colors
of ice cream!
oreo!!!
strawberry!!!
vanilla!!!

by Catherine


Space

Space oh space
how I love you
you are 1,001,000
miles away   oh
how you make
my brain tickle

by Jack
     

Maniac

The maniac
gets you and
he steals  money  
he sneaks in your
house      he steals
treasure  he steals
food        he steals all

by Jacob


    The Butterfly

the butterfly
is in the
meadow
finding
nectar!
in the flowers

by Ari

Snake

swiveling snake
shedding its skin
slithering away from
a roadrunner

by Aidan


Fish

fish live in
streams and oceans
too    fish eat
plants and insects
too

by Michelle

Cake

I have a
birthday party
I make a cake
and to have
my cake
come here
I like
my cake and
I like my cake
forever

by Jocelyn


Tiger

tiger eating
zebra
meat

by Edwin


My House

my toys are
behind my chimney
my kitchen
is in order
my room is
organized
my house looks
pretty

by Victor


My Egg Hatched

Look at my
egg    it hatched
there is a chick
this chick is
so cute that
I keep it     oh
wow!

by Hannah


Lions

lions are the
king
of the
jungle
lions are
fierce

by Nadia


Ice Cream

I eat ice cream
at my home and
my brother eats ice cream
in a cone
We like
rainbow
ice
cream.

by Victoria


The Clouds Are Nickels

the first part of it:
nickels are the right size
for a cloud 
the next part of it:
clouds are soft 
clouds are like
rice and mashed potatoes.
I will drink lemonade wow!
I am holding a cloud bank
of nickels  wow!
a lot of nickels outside

by Anthony



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When illustrating, Anthony took a nickel out of his pocket and used it for tracing the round fluffy shapes of clouds.  And truly, he knew--or created--the cloud bank image.  So much goodness wow!  Which kindergarten poems are your favorite?

The May Day round-up is with Ellen at Elementary Dear Reader--see you there!

Tuesday, April 30, 2013

OIK Tuesday returns! kindergarten poetry

Today Overheard in Kindergarten Tuesday extends into Poetry Friday!  My eighteen Mighty Minnows spent the week of April 15 meeting poems by Langston Hughes, Lilian Moore, Arnold Adoff and Beatrice Schenk de Regniers to learn what poets do.  On the Friday they worked to compose their own poems.  I'm excited to share this work from children at varying stages of independent writing ability.

My proudest accomplishment as a teacher is that EVERY child knew what they wanted to write and felt competent to write a poem, and that EVERY child chose a different small thing to write about (with one exception, and that was my fault; I gave homework the night before to write a little poem about pockets). How's that for Thinking and Academic Success Skills? 




Animals 

I found a cat
I found another cat
I found three cats

by Nadja
 

Mosquitoes

 
I hate
mosquitoes
They bite
people
They give me
rashes 

by Bertrand
 

Flowers

 
I like flowers
You do too 
They can be colors
Well, you can like them
too   
Everybody can

by Karina


I Am Pretty 

I walk
to a big butterfly
I wear
my green dress
I go
to my castle

by Janie
 

Pockets

I really like pockets
and what you can put
inside 
you can take it out
and show it
or you can keep it in
and hide
 
by Briella 

unleashing the undead
 
the night unleashes
the dead: vampires,
zombies, ghosts, ghouls
ripping your throat.

by Beck
[Beck and I mutually agreed that while this is a cracking poem,
it isn't quite appropriate for a kindergarten anthology.  He's written
a new one about shoes, but I wanted to post his original creation here.]


Scaring Carrie
 
BOO!
I’m a giant.
and she goes
away!

by Santiago 
 

Dominoes
 
dominoes
put them in a row
flick really soft
flick with your finger
watch them tumble
see them tumble!

by Mikael
 

 Fast 
 
Fast brings
  speed.  fire
  brings
super
            speed!
     super super
   super speed!
    speed   That’s what
I call it!
 
     by Arden
 

Popcorn
 
popcorn
in my pocket
popcorn
in my pocket
then my popcorn
pops away! 

by Antonio 


Why 
 
Why do you think
you’re going to
bed?   I don’t think
I am going to bed.
Ohhhh!
 
by Tonya
 

To the Sun 
 
I flew to the sun
and was gone
forever and
I said   NOOO 

by Tiago 



Sing
 
Sing me
and everybody
sing and
the world
can sing
too

by Henderson 


A Horse

the wind is going fast
when the horse goes fast
the wind goes blowing
through her hair
when the grass blows
the horse goes away fast
the horse stops
to get a drink 

by Le’Ann
[Can you see the influence of Christina Rossetti here?  One of our
anthology poems was "Clouds," with the white sheep walking away
slow.]

Paul’s Pockets
 
pocket skirts and
pocket shirts and
pants and pretty dresses
all have pockets
but I like Paul’s pockets
best

by Cora



 
Cats
 
cats are furry
cats are cuddly
cats are friendly
cats are hairy
cats are mean sometimes.

by Merrilee 



The Pockets

the pockets
are very important
why?  they help you
carry things when you
need them 

by Indi 



My Shiny Bow

Shiny shiny!
Shiny bow
I like it
I like it
It’s very low
Very very
Very very
Very very
Very low

by Susye

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