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Snatches of Rhapsody
First warm days of driving
windows rolled down:
I catch
snatches of song,
muddles of melody,
hints of harmony
over engines
idling at the lights
I catch
booming basslines
dopplering down the highway,
horns echoing horns,
and sometimes even
with the windows up
I know what they're hearing
because I'm belting it too
HM 2015
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Can't wait to find out what everyone else is snatching at today!
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Donna's up first today with a Gingery game--visit her blog to see the dog in question! (I actually contemplated challenging you people to go a day without a dog, but I'm glad I reconsidered--we would have missed out on this.)
Snatch and Catch
Fish a tissue off her tongue - so many times that song is sung!
Snare a sneaker sneaked away - a never ending game to play!
Snatch my sock out of her teeth - and give it an RIP wreath!
- This is just the game I play! Please don’t take this stuff away!
Seize my towel, toss to clean - I don’t think I’m being mean!
Reclaim shirt, and now my boot - somehow they’re all seen as loot!
Confiscate that little screw - tucked in cheek to later chew!
- I’m okay, I won’t get sick! It’s really good stuff that I pick!
"Come", now "Sit", and "Drop it, Pup" - Your "Snatch It" games are all washed up!
Your toys are all here in your bin-choose from here and we’ll both win!
No more snatching things from me-I'm catching on to your tricks, see!
- These toys look good enough it’s true. But they don’t smell a bit like you!
©Donna JT Smith, 2015
Charles went to the doggy route too. At least his culprit is apologetic, unlike Ginger:
MEA CULPA
Fido snatches his
snack from my fingertips,
“That’s not nice.” I
say. “You know better.”
He snorts, chews,
swallows, then licks
My hand before letting
out a soft bark.
I smile; scrub the
back of his ears, whisper,
“Apology accepted.”
(c) Charles Waters 2015 all rights reserved.
Carol snatches courage from the jaws of claustrophobia in this poem about her MRI experience. Read more here.
I'm ready, Machine.
Ready to overcome fear.
Into your cavern I go,
first step forward for me.
With eyes closed,
music playing,
I seek support
to quiet my nerves.
Listen to your breath.
My yoga breathing
starts to work
until I think of
the tight space-
the closed in feeling.
Backwards, I go.
Boom, boom, boom.
Machine, your reverberating beat
snatches my quiet time away.
Panic, yes, on the verge,
but wait, I am supposed
to be positive.
Machine, don't snatch
my inner peace.
Don't be eager to
get the best of me.
Action of faith comes to mind.
Step forward into the light.
Eyes open to meet my fears.
It's only a white space.
Music comes back.
Relief!
Knocking noises reverberate,
grow in strength.
Machine, don't snatch my positivity.
A gentle voice calls.
How are you doing?
Only six more minutes left.
Hope surfaces.
Grounded in the belief
that I can succeed,
I seize the moment.
The music is soothing.
I listen intently for its
soft sounds drowning
out the pounding noise.
Machine, my nemesis
you once were, but now
my chariot to open
space and fresh air.
Laughingly, I snatch my
victory from the jaws
of your closed-in quarters.
I feel proud that I
walk away the conqueror.
I'm going to need this poem someday--I'm the kid who could never go down the covered slide of claustrophobia!
On Learning That Today I Will Get My SEVENTH New Student This Year
ReplyDeleteSnatch me back from the edge.
I might jump
or I might fall
and I'm not sure that thing about growing wings
on the
way
down
will actually work.
©Mary Lee Hahn, 2015
True story.
7 of my (now) 27 students were not with us on the first day of school. That means about one-fourth of my class is comprised of new students. We are in about the 26th week of school, so that means I've averaged about one new student every month. No big deal? Imagine what that does to the classroom community you've worked so hard to build...and rebuild...and rebuild...
Sigh.
http://www.maryleehahn.com/2015/03/snatch.html
Hang in there, Mary Lee. The edge is not waiting for you.
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DeleteMary Lee,
DeleteIn fourth grade when I transferred in the middle of the year, I walked into my new classroom to meet my new teacher. I was scared, worried, anxious. I missed my old school, my friends, etc.
My new teacher said, as I walked in the door, "Oh no! Not another one."
I didn't feel very welcome. It was a terrible year.
Please work to make each child feel welcome and special.
Absolutely, Joy! My venting all took place in the poem. I never had to move as a kid, but I know how hard it is. He was glad to know that he wasn't the only one in the class who had been "the new student." He has already made friends and is fitting right in!
DeleteNo dogs for me today, however, I do have a cat (and a guest) in a tanka:
ReplyDeletenoises
from the other room
winter guest
hides bits and crumbs snatched
while the cat and I slept
Funny thing (not really), after I wrote this, my cat dispatCHed a guest. Being left with those kinds of morning gifts is not appreciated.
Since I do not have pets, I can only imagine what awaits.
DeleteCrows
ReplyDeleteCrow snatches beetle
from crow. Now black streaks spring sky
with crow chase and caws.
—Kate Coombs, 2015
Alliteration Abounds...
DeleteI am going to write for the Digital Playground Maker group where we are to lift a line. Here is my intro:
ReplyDeleteSnatch al line.
Be polite.
Offer credit.
It's only right.
When you've snatched
a wondrous quote
be sure to thank
the one who wrote.
Carol
DeleteI really like the message of this poem.
Heidi, your Wayne World video is a great intro into your spring poem.
ReplyDeleteHere's my contribution: Mama baked a batch
ReplyDeleteCookies from scratch
So sweet
So quiet were my feet
when I sneaked in for the snatch
Clever poem that a child would like because it is probably a motion they have been involved with.
DeleteThanks, Carol.
DeleteThanks, Carol.
DeleteWHAT YA GONNA DO?
ReplyDeleteOpen gate
Latch it.
Flying ball
Catch it.
Jigsaw puzzle
Match it.
Eggs in a nest
Hatch it.
Hole in my sock
Patch it.
Got a wrench
Ratchet.
Oh, a cookie
Snatch it.
I'm starting to feel very Valerie Worthian with all my small poems. This poem would be fun to try with two voices as a call and response.
Joy, this may be my favorite of yours all month! What fun!
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