Isn't my new rug beautiful? It's so beautiful I had to write a poem about it.
Twenty-Four Doors
The new rug in my room
is one inch deep,
a layer of soil
made of snowflake and moon.
I lie down by a river of lightning and leaves.
My arms span a sky
like a mine full of gold;
turtles in treetops nibble my toes.
A cloudburst of apples
showers my head.
I tickle sharks
at the rainbow’s end,
feed the bluebird of gravity
acorns and sun.
They can keep me inside,
but the rug on my floor has
twenty-four doors that lead
into the wild.
Heidi Mordhorst 2011
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Head to Jama's Alphabet Soup for the usual smorgasbord of poetry dishes, autumn edition, and don't forget to stop by again on Tuesday evening if you'd like a poetry challenge!
Head to Jama's Alphabet Soup for the usual smorgasbord of poetry dishes, autumn edition, and don't forget to stop by again on Tuesday evening if you'd like a poetry challenge!
What a beautiful rug and the loveliest of poems to go with it. I want one, too. :)
ReplyDeleteIt's just a beautiful rug, and poem. They both invite one into the wonderful world your classroom must be. I like that ending, "twenty-four doors that lead into the wild" and "turtles in treetops nibble my toes".
ReplyDeleteI love your rug! And I want to kiss the "bluebird of gravity." Congratulations on your new cozy spot, and I hope you'll post some photos of it holding you all close. Such joyful words about something so small, yet so big. A.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Heidi. You've woven a magnificent magic carpet of imaginary images from your adorable new doorfull rug!
ReplyDeleteWow. I wish I had a teacher like you when I was younger. Your students are mighty lucky. :) Couldn't help but sigh as I was reading through your beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteMy favorites though are the following:
"A cloudburst of apples
showers my head.
I tickle sharks
at the rainbow’s end,
feed the bluebird of gravity
acorns and sun."
Breathtaking. If a classroom carpet can inspire you to write something as lovely as this, then ... wow. :)
If I were in your class, I would want to sit on a different spot each time we came to the meeting area! LOVE that the doors "lead into the wild."
ReplyDeleteWow - such an important thing for five- and six-year-olds, and a delight for grown-ups! I want to hang out on it, too. The poem is wonderful - I echo appreciation for the bluebird line: "feed the bluebird of gravity
ReplyDeleteacorns and sun" - mmmmmm.
I know just exactly where to put a beautiful rug like this in my house -- in my study, by my desk overlooking the garden, surrounded by with my favorite "quiet" books.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful! I wish I could sit on your rug!
ReplyDeletewere i of a certain age, i would lay with my face against the run, drawing lines around the world with my finger making up friends and languages as i crossed the waters.
ReplyDeletegreat rug, equally fitting poem.
Your excitement is not inordinate! The Navajos and many other cultures know that the physical beauty of the room helps us learn.
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