For the Hatching of the
Heart
Today the 4’s made
scrambled eggs.
Each took a turn to crack
a shell,
and each one of the group
of twelve
did it just the same:
grasped the egg
in one hot hand, not
gingerly,
but with a grip that would
have
crushed it,
smearing egg and bits of
shell
all over palms and shirts,
had the teacher not
explained
how to hold it carefully
between the fingertips;
raised that hand
to whack the egg against
the bowl
with force that would have
shattered it,
spraying egg and bits of
shell
all over cheeks and hair,
had the teacher not
explained
how to tap assertively
but gently on the rim;
laid both thumbs
against the break,
preparing to release
it with a squeeze that
would have
smashed it,
dripping egg and bits of
shell
all over shoes and floor,
had the teacher not
explained
how to pry the jagged
halves
apart with one swift pull.
When all the eggs were in
the bowl,
the tricky part was done.
Not one of a dozen
children
had trouble with the
whisk,
with beating all twelve
eggs into
one deep yellow froth.
Today the 4’s ate
scrambled eggs,
and every one insisted:
they liked the crunchy
bits the best.
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And I can't let this post go by without mentioning my very favorite Valentine's Day story and possibly my favorite Eileen Spinelli work, Somebody Loves You, Mr. Hatch. If you don't know this book, run right out and get a copy today. And look what I found!
Let's see what's hatCHing out of you today! It should be a busy day over at Reading to the Core with Catherine. See you there!
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Oh, we have some great work popping out here!
First, Charles writes small but perfectly formed:
HAPPY BORN DAY
Baby chicks hatch out
Of oval cocoon to shimmy
In sunshine’s happiness.
Nest I mean next, from Diane a whole sensory adventure in 13 lines:
Through the Bathroom Window
The nest appeared
seemingly overnight.
The number of eggs
was never determined.
Before we knew it
the chicks had hatched,
fledged, and left us.
Two weeks--fourteen
days was all it took
for them to fly away.
Barely long enough
to learn how to focus
our eyes and ears.
Mary Lee's is an ode to what mothers give up to propagate the species:
SACRIFICE
How does
the buzzing
hummingbird
sit still enough to hatch
the two
(not three)
(size of a pea)
eggs that are in her batch?
©Mary Lee Hahn, 2015
Donna gives clues that she may once have been a poultry owner. I love the way the queen's train becomes a scurrying column of chicks!
Rhode Island Queen
Dipping her head to the ground
the old queen nods
to her subjects
this way
and that
her long train
flowing behind
undulating
over the ground -
my old red hen
whom I thought was lost
has returned again
from sitting
on a hidden nest
waiting
feeling
for just the right moment
for them to
hatch;
as she nears
her
undulating train
becomes a scurrying
fuzzy, feather quilt of chicks
blanketing her bare
toes.
©Donna JT Smith, 2015
Kate's extended metaphor is just "write" for those of us who are brooding this month, trying to hatch a new poem every day:
Hatching
The breaking out,
bit by bit.
Sharp-clawed toe,
beak and head.
The newest new,
wet wonder of it.
And when it’s through,
body still unsteady,
can’t walk yet,
not quite ready.
Page is quiet,
words there shiver.
New ideas
all aquiver.
Not yet able, can’t quite roam.
Still a baby,
new-hatched poem.
—Kate Coombs, 2015
Joy stops in with an ostriCH egg:
HATCHING
Said the baby bird
to the ostrich egg
"Let me out.
Please, I beg."
A crack with my beak
it starts to catch.
My special tooth
helps me hatch.
--Joy Acey
Jone shares what feels like a blessing, inviting the newly hatching season:
let spring hatch
let songbirds arrive
and wake us
by their song
let tulips bloom and frogs croak
love songs for us all.
© 2015 Jone Rush MacCulloch
all rights reserved
And Matt stops by with a haiku on birdly intellect:
Albumen-soaked
hatchling, too young
to wonder
--Matt Forrest Esenwine
And Carol triples her bird-count with this piece, which I have taken the liberty of titling:
A Golden Plan
It's time to hatch a golden plan,
not with silly green eggs and ham.
Try poetry and photos - Shazam! -
an artistic venture of grand purport
to stretch imaginations and transport
minds to wander, recalling winter bliss
while not thinking of wind's bitter kiss.
Indeed!
Winter entered with quite a roar, held court,
and listened intently to many a loud retort.
Now, it transitions to yet another spring.
When will I hear the sweet robin sing?--Carol Varsalona
Looking forward to more! Feel free to join the egg toss today!
Brave teacher! I like your poem and your patience. I've never read Mr. Hatch, I'll have to look for it.
ReplyDeleteHere's a little poem in exchange for the gruesome one I sent you earlier.
Through the Bathroom Window
The nest appeared
seemingly overnight.
The number of eggs
was never determined.
Before we knew it
the chicks had hatched,
fledged, and left us.
Two weeks--fourteen
days was all it took
for them to fly away.
Barely long enough
to learn how to focus
our eyes and ears.
Sorry to hear about the snow. I saw my first blooming crocuses day before yesterday -- keep the hope, yours are waiting under the drifts!
ReplyDeleteI love how you crack open (ha) this small moment.
I've got hummingbirds today:
SACRIFICE
How does
the buzzing
hummingbird
sit still enough to hatch
the two
(not three)
(size of a pea)
eggs that are in her batch?
©Mary Lee Hahn, 2015
Loved your poem! The ending was perfect!
ReplyDeleteAnd here's a bit of a memory poem about hatch...
Rhode Island Queen
Dipping her head to the ground
the old queen nods
to her subjects
this way
and that
her long train
flowing behind
undulating
over the ground -
my old red hen
whom I thought was lost
has returned again
from sitting
on a hidden nest
waiting
feeling
for just the right moment
for them to
hatch;
as she nears
her
undulating train
becomes a scurrying
fuzzy, feather quilt of chicks
blanketing her bare
toes.
©Donna JT Smith, 2015
And my short Haiku about how much I like the whites of eggs:
DeleteDown the Hatch
Chewing egg whites - yuck!
Tiny flavorless bits that
won’t go down the hatch.
Hatching
ReplyDeleteThe breaking out,
bit by bit.
Sharp-clawed toe,
beak and head.
The newest new,
wet wonder of it.
And when it’s through,
body still unsteady,
can’t walk yet,
not quite ready.
Page is quiet,
words there shiver.
New ideas
all aquiver.
Not yet able, can’t quite roam.
Still a baby,
new-hatched poem.
—Kate Coombs, 2015
Perfect...and true!
DeleteSorry, contributors--I made a change to format that wrecked your line breaks and I don't have time to make it go back. I'll fix it after school. : (
ReplyDeleteHATCHING
ReplyDeleteSaid the baby bird
to the ostrich egg
"Let me out.
Please, I beg."
A crack with my beak
it starts to catch.
My special tooth
helps me hatch.
Love your hatching poem, Heidi (and Somebody Loves You Mr. Hatch was a favorite of my son's and one of the books that made me want to write for kids!)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poems hatching here today. I also took some time to listen to Mr. Hatch, a new story for me. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine:
ReplyDeletelet spring hatch
let songbirds arrive
and wake us
by their song
let tulips bloom and frogs croak
love songs for us all.
© 2015 Jone Rush MacCulloch all rights reserved
Some nice poems here, Heidi! Here's mine, a haiku:
ReplyDeleteAlbumen-soaked
hatchling, too young
to wonder
Good morning, Heidi. I was at a conference.When I came home last night I fell asleep and never woke up until this morning. I had the post ready but never posted it. Here it is http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2015/03/hatching-plan.html.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed all of the Hatch Poems. This is such fun-trying to create a poem from a word.
Love this!! Ok, here's mine:
ReplyDeleteHatch,
Hatched,
Gotta hatch,
Hatching,
Life, birth, renewal.
Happy Spring!
The scrambled egg process of the 4 year olds (crunchy bits and all!) and the many poems about birds hatching out are a great juxtaposition. Love this post, Heidi! May spring hatch soon in your neck of the woods. =)
ReplyDeleteI loved cooking with my students when I had a classroom, and your poem perfectly captures the fun we had. I had older students, though, so I don't remember too many crunchy bits! Thanks for sharing the video. Mr. Hatch is one of my favorites, too!
ReplyDelete