1 teacher + 5 mentor poems for two voices +16 second-graders + 142 days of school = infinitely intriguing poems by 7-8's!
Dog and Cat in the Park
by
Melvin A.R.
Hi!
Let’s go play
in
the park, or on the
monkey
bars,
So
first, we’ll do what I want,
but
if you don’t do
what
I want,
then
we can play everything
we
want.
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Oh,
let’s play tag,
We
can make a map
of
the park,
and
then we’ll do what I want,
and
you don’t do
what
I want,
then
we can play everything
we
want.
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Yellow and Pink in Color Land
by Nathan Z.
yellow
so bright
see
me in the night
see
me shine like a star
see
ME so majestic
I think I’m brighter
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pink
in the morning
see
ME so bright
see
me brighting up the morning
I think I’m brighter
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Jacob and the
Moon on the Moon
by Jacob L-M.
Moon,
are you made
out
of cheese?
Can
I eat you?
Maybe
we can have a
snack
together?
No,
I don’t think so.
Yay!
Mmm! Is this
New
Zealand cheddar?
Definitely.
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Yes
certainly!
No!
You cannot eat me!
Why
yes! Did you bring any
food?
Well,
I have no choice.
We
can have my cheese.
Of
course! Do you like it?
I’m
glad!
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Soccer Ball and Kid on the Soccer Field
by Kelly M.
Kick
me kick me
kid!
I
am a
big
soccer ball
so
kick me
kid!
If
you do
I
will give you
a
goal!!!
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Okay
I will
kick
you but
first
let me
put
my cleats on
then
I will kick you
Here
I go!!!
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Wolf and Bird in the Forest-Woods
by Joseph S.
I’m
a wolf who howls
at
the moon.
I
live in a forest. I jump high
and
I eat birds.
Sometimes
I go in
the
dark and I
catch
birds.
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I’m
a bird who flies
in
the sky.
I
like the sky. I make sure
I
look for food. If I
get
food I bring
it
to my babies.
And
I need to get out
of
here!
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Ms. Mordhorst and Students
in School
by Roselyn H.
Dear
Students
I
hug you up
Oh
yes, I do,
yes!
I
don’t mind at all
oh
no I don’t
I
hug you up with love
happy
wishes to you
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Dear
Ms. Mordhorst
with
every piece
and
with all your heart
Oh
do you?
Oh how nice
Oh
I hope you don’t
we
do too!
we
love you.
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"Yay! Mmm! Is this New Zealand cheddar?" LOVE this! On my way to Trader Joe's now, so will be looking for some. :-) Christie @ https://wonderingandwondering.wordpress.com/blog/
ReplyDeleteOh, what fun! I love "see me brighting up the morning," "I will give you a goal!!!" and "I need to get out of here!" I love the originality and creativity of these young voices. Thanks for sharing them!
ReplyDeleteWhat a perfectly delightful equation! These poems rock! My favorite line is from the bird who needs to "get out of here" with the wolf.
ReplyDeleteHow sweet to hug you up with all your heart! Happy wishes to you, and cheese, and goals, and bright imaginations!
ReplyDeleteThese are wonderful, so much fun! They must be fun to act out with plenty of young enthusiasm. :-)
ReplyDeleteI love seeing the verve kids bring to poetry. I must remember to add some more of that. Is it the pepper or the garlic?
ReplyDelete"I hug you up with love" ...and these poems, too!
ReplyDeleteWhat a delight of two-voice poems! "I hug you up with love."
ReplyDeleteOh. Another new word. Cleats. I read it earlier in the PoetryFriday hop - and wondered then what it was. Now I'm guessing that they're what we call 'spikes'. :)
ReplyDeleteThese two-voice poems are such fun. You make me want to write one... (I think I will. :) )
I did. I did! I just wrote my first poem in two voices, adding to the historical verse novel project I'm just teetering around the edges of - preparing to take the plunge! Thank-you for providing the inspiration. It was the perfect form for this momentous meeting of two groups.
DeleteI really enjoyed these Heidi! I know I would love to hear your students read them :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, Heidi! These are wonderful. The voice in each is absolutely priceless. I really hope the parents of the wonderful kids get to see this collection. Gosh, what lucky kids....what a lucky teacher.... what synergy....what serendipity.
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