Here I stand, O Noble Class,
to help your poem come to pass.
Whisper words of Lego blocks
That I your teacher may unlock.
What words will you whisper today? Your poem is really developing now. Should we include some sensory details, like shapes and colors?
Love,
Ms. Mordhorst
P.S. Blog visitors, the Diamond Miners love it when you leave comments directly for them. Thanks for all your encouragement!
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BRAINSTORMING
work hard, seems like, to think, we love,
apart and together,
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When we work
together
it feels fun
and
difficult like Lego
pieces,
feels like struggling
with
frustration and figuring
what
to do. We
live like Legos,
pushing and building,
pulling and flipping,
lifting and twisting.
We only have
to
listen to our
friends
when we build
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Words have been added to this poem by these wordsmiths, in order:
Round 1 Round 2
Ms. M Ms. M
Ziva Henry
Eric Elena
Eldana Patrick
Henry Ziva
Kathy Eldana
Ines Max
Elena Xavier
Sophia
Patrick
Xavier
Arya
Tyler
Caleb
Max
Love the poem diamond miners.It keeps on getting better and better.The poem is so far great.Me and Eldana love it!
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