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For those who are just tuning in, welcome to the 30days30words cumulative, collaborative poem! To keep things simple for busy people this National Poetry Month, I posted a single word on April 1 and each day have invited all comers to suggest the next word in the poem. We have continued like this throughout April, one word at a time, and are nearing the conclusion of a poem of surprising form and function. Please do go back and see how the poem has evolved through the faithful contributions of around a dozen thoughtful, playful collaborators!
So, dear players, I have a special challenge for you on April 29. Instead of suggesting the final word, I invite you to suggesta revision, an edit, a change that you believe will improve the whole poem. I've certainly felt at several points along the way that I may have made a misstep in my selections or formatting, or that my head overruled my heart or vice versa. I bet YOU can help me and "birthday" finish with a flourish. Thank you!